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Lines Composed Upon Seeing a Young Man on the Bus Who, While I Understand It Was Hot, Was Dressed More Appropriately for South Beach Than For a Day of Shopping Downtown, And Who Really Ought to Know Better (a haiku)

Pull your damn pants up.
No one wants to see your butt.
And put a shirt on.

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5 Responses to “Lines Composed Upon Seeing a Young Man on the Bus Who, While I Understand It Was Hot, Was Dressed More Appropriately for South Beach Than For a Day of Shopping Downtown, And Who Really Ought to Know Better (a haiku)”

  1. CDS says:
    June 13, 2007 at 9:20 pm

    You sound like an old curmudgeon.
    “These kids today… blah blah blah.”

    (Of course, it takes one to know one.)

  2. mike says:
    June 14, 2007 at 8:40 am

    John,
    why does someone else’s dress good bother you?
    mike

  3. mike says:
    June 14, 2007 at 8:42 am

    I am sorry, I meant to write “dress code” not “dress good”.

  4. John says:
    June 14, 2007 at 8:56 am

    It was more the undress code that was bothersome.

  5. jdubya says:
    June 18, 2007 at 8:11 pm

    I love it.